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Blood window rain

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Literature Text

I looked through the window
Rain was pouring
My eyes cried
Tears were pouring
I took out a razor blade
BLOOD WAS FLOWING
I layed down and died
Old-ish poem :)
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NakuraXchann's avatar
It sounds rather painful; however, I would switch "My eyes cried" with "My eyes were crying". Overall, well done.